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Storm #10 annotations

Posted on Saturday, July 26, 2025 by Paul in Annotations

STORM vol 5 #10
“Thunder War Begins”
Writer: Murewa Ayodele
Artist: Lucas Werneck
Colour artist: Alex Guimarães
Letterer: Travis Lanham
Editor: Tom Brevoort

PAGES 1-2. Flash forward: Bishop releases an energy blast.

Bishop. This is the first time we’ve seen him in this book – his last non-cameo appearance was in the Timeslide one-shot at the end of last year. As we’ll see later in the issue, Bishop has been entrusted with looking after the mutant child from issue #1, who is offhandedly given the name “Jaden” on the recap page. The previous issue indicated that Storm had either had her knowledge of the child’s whereabouts magically suppressed in order to keep them safe, or at least had magically prevented herself from being able to disclose it.

We’ll see later that Jaden has had a nightmare and lost control of their powers; Bishop has to absorb the resulting energy; and this is him discharging it, which is likely to make Jaden traceable, hence Bishop’s regrets. The flashforward takes place around page 13 of the story.

PAGE 3. Splash page.

As always, this title has a symbolic splash page with credits, immediately followed by the recap page with credits (and the story title being shown on both). Why? That’s just how they do things around here.

PAGES 4-7. Storm, Manifold and Maggott in deep space.

Abbaq. As the footnote says, this planet comes from Avengers Unlimited Infinity Comic #9-13 (2022), also written by Murewa Ayodele. That storyline that involved the Avengers fighting a bunch of alien kaiju. It ended by indicating that the heroes had inadvertently offended the Abbaqi sky god, apparently by defying its efforts to punish its people, and so there might be other plot reasons for referencing it.

The dead monster which is seen floating in space here is also appeared at the end of Avengers Unlimited #9, in a similar condition.

Storm, Manifold and Maggott are here so that Maggott can consume this massive kaiju corpse. The official purpose of this mission is to clear it out of the way so that Abbaq can be observed from Earth more easily, but it seems that it’s also an exercise in powering up Maggott to a ridiculous degree (which is why they don’t just teleport the thing out of the way, something that Manifold could have done immediately).

Shuri. The Black Panther’s younger sister hasn’t appeared in this book, but evidently Manifold has a crush on her anyway.

Gateway appeared in the last two issues. He’s been presented as Manifold’s mentor in previous stories, as in Secret Warriors #4.

Emperor T’Challa is presumably given that title here in reference to the Intergalactic Empire of Wakanda.

PAGES 8-13. Storm, Manifold and Maggott capture Sango.

Orun. The realm of the Yoruba gods. I don’t think it’s ever appeared before except as a generic “African” god realm in brief cameos such as Thor #301. It seems to be a sort of crystal paradise here.

Sango. We last saw Sango in issue #7, when he was one of the rival storm gods who fought Storm in the Brazilian rain forest.

“Three wives.” In mythology, Sango does indeed have three wives – shun, bba and ya. The last of those is also a storm goddess, so perhaps she could be significant.

“I am not the storm god who retreats.” This is how Sango described Storm in issue #7.

“You slept with your eyes closed. I warned you not to.” Issue #7, though she was addressing the gods as a group rather than Sango in particular.

“You conjured an anomaly that took the lives of my people.” This is the weather disaster from issues #7-8 in Brazil, though I don’t think it was clearly identified as having killed anyone in that story (beyond a single pilot).

“You made me cut my hair.” Issue #7, though again, this wasn’t really specific to Sango – she cut through her hair in order to free herself from Chacc.

“There were decades of her life when she did not possess her mutant abilities.” Um. Well. There’s the period in her childhood before her powers emerged, and then there’s the period from Uncanny X-Men #185-225 where she doesn’t have powers. But that’s not decades.

“The only two mutant teleporters who can reach locations outside our universe…” Manifold and Gateway, the narrator claims. It doesn’t really stand up: Magik’s whole thing is teleporting via another dimension, for example. In fact, several previous stories have established that Manifold’s powers normally don’t work outside the main Marvel Universe (since his whole thing is being able to communicate with the universe). He was able to reach the White Hot Room as part of the Six in S.W.O.R.D. during the Krakoan era, but only with the aid of five other teleporters and Fabian Cortez. So… no, this is just wrong.

Still, what matters for the purposes of the story is that Gateway and Manifold give Storm access to particular pocket dimensions that she’s using to trap hostile storm gods such as Sango.

Chaac. Another of the storm gods from issue #7 – he’s the Mayan god.

Pocket Dimension Marisol-Abeni. Storm appears to have named this prison dimension after Flourish and Abeni (a Wakandan mutant who she rescued in Black Panther vol 7 #23).

The scene ends with Storm and co returning to Atlanta and, somehow, apparently being able to see Bishop firing his energy beam into the air over in Madripoor. Because that’s how the curvature of the Earth works! If there’s meant to be some other explanation for what she’s seeing here, it’s not apparent.

PAGES 14-16. Storm and co arrive at Jaden’s safehouse and are attacked by Étienne.

Page 14 panels 4-5 are a flashback to the disaster from issue #1. Jaden presented as male in that story (and in the flashback here), and is drawn as female in the present day, so presumably they’re either trans or non-binary. Nobody uses any third-person pronouns in relation to them in this story, so I’ll stick to neutral.

The clear implication of this and the next scene is that Maggott and Manifold are killed remotely by magic – this is certainly what Fabiyi believes is happening. But we don’t actually get a clear panel confirming that, and it’s the sort of thing that’s obviously going to be undone by cosmic reset button.

PAGES 17-18. Étienne and Fabiyi are interrupted by before killing Storm.

Étienne. This is the same FBI agent we saw visiting Limbo in issue #9. Apparently her magical abilities include killing people at a distance using voodoo dolls, which she cuts in half with scissors. Presumably she was anticipating Maggott and Manifold because of their prior association with Storm; she doesn’t seem to have a doll for Bishop or for Jaden (though the plan is apparently to arrest Jaden, so it may be they want them alive). She seems to have no particular hesitation about killing Maggott or Manifold, but does apparently hesitate at an order to kill Storm, despite having the voodoo doll ready.

Fabiyi. He seems to believe that magically killing Storm in Madripoor will somehow escape detection because the place is lawless, which seems awfully optimistic in terms of the capacities of the Avengers and the X-Men.

Galactus and the Silver Surfer Soot. The Silver Surfer Soot is Norrin Radd having absorbed the power of Surtur’s Twilight Sword, as seen in the flash forward in issue #7. Issue #8 briefly showed the Surfer and Galactus fighting a “rot storm” conjured by Hadad, the leader of the enemy faction in the thunder gods’ war. Infinity indicates that she saved them from that attack and then brought them to the present day; for some reason, she seemed to think that they would be able to tell her where Eternity was.

Infinity. She seems to assume that Storm must have imprisoned Eternity, rather than Eternity possessing Storm. We haven’t seen her before in this series, but Thor claimed in issue #8 that Hadad had previously controlled her as a shield, among other grandiose claims that might not be literally true. If it’s to be taken seriously, then Infinity would naturally be expected to side with Storm against Hadad.

Bring on the comments

  1. Diana says:

    Missed two REFERENCES on pages 8-13 🙂

  2. Devin says:

    It may not be intentional, but in the Unlimited comic there’s a character saying that when you name something, it becomes yours. Marisol-Abeni, then, is unquestionably Storm’s.

  3. Paul says:

    I did indeed… knew I’d forgotten something…

  4. Tim says:

    Can I ask the board something, and I mean it sincerely: is this title as gibberish as it sounds?

    I know that sounds harsh, but I Paul’s reviews and recaps provide my only insight into a lot of titles that don’t interest me. Rarely to I see recaps as unintelligible as this title seems.

    I have no axe to grind, but what’s the consensus opinion? I gather this title is relatively popular, so clearly some people are speaking with their wallets, but what do the crowd on here think?

  5. Alexx Kay says:

    I think this book’s success is driven almost entirely by the excellent artwork. The writing contains some (arguably *too many*) interesting ideas, but is astoundly bad at *communicating* those ideas coherently.

  6. Si says:

    I find the title very hard reading. I couldn’t explain the plot. It’s like a fever dream.

  7. Diana says:

    @Tim: It’s one of the worst-written books in the current line – incoherent, muddled, interested in absolutely nothing other than a level of Storm worship that would make even Claremont balk.

  8. MasterMahan says:

    Honestly, I’d probably love this book if the insanity seemed more self-aware or tongue-in-cheek. It would be a perfect satire of overpowered main characters. Storm just happens to have a flying island powered by giant unexplained mecha. She’s terminally ill until it’s easily fixed, then she dies anyway but is resurrected by the personification of the universe itself. The seemingly omniscient narrator this issue calls Storm “the Omega of Omegas — the Omega Annihilator” and declares she simply has to step onto a battlefield and victory is assured.

    I’m not entirely convinced it isn’t a comedy. The last story was called “Sinister Schemes of the Stars and Stripes”. She just fought a butt naked thunder god with sound effects like “Wield!” and “Butterfly Flip!” The cover for next issue has her riding a hippo.

  9. Luis Dantas says:

    @Tim

    I may be biased against Storm the character (I am, for a while now), but this book is not just hard to follow for me; it feels like its whole mission is to be impossible to follow.

    It _does_ feel like a fever dream; it _does_ feel like it may be satire (specifically of power creep storytelling); it _may_ be straight power creep storytelling (and in that case, Storm is precisely the wrong character for such a plot on the heels of Al Ewings unbelievably indulgent run of “X-Men Red”); it may just be the writer playing with us; it may even be an incredibly smart broken, mishappen narrative to lead us into some sort of larger event, for all I know.

    The bottom line is, it does not work for me. At all. I have given up entirely on attempting to follow the plot – assuming that there is a plot at all, which is an unproven assertion to me – and am now on it just for the ludicrouness of the specific situations and how they defiantly refuse to make any sense when confronted with what came before – often from the immediately preceding scene or issue.

    Sometimes I feel like Ayodele somehow knows how much I disliked Al Ewing’s “awesome non-white savior foreign” take on Storm in “X-Men Red” and decided that I deserve to be chastised a whole lot more, hence this book. A marvelously chauvinistic yet masochistic fantasy that somehow seems to fit the tone of this book. It takes the excesses of the previous one to the cube, then compounds that with an absurd amount of _gloriously_ unexplained, complex gadgets, situations and environments that make it look like Storm should have been funding the Avengers and the X-Men all this time. Tony Stark, Charles Xavier, and arguably even Tchalla have nothing on Ororo’s utterly unexplained resources. And that was, remarkably, _before_ she became the literal embodiement of existence itself and did a remarkable job of not allowing that to factor into the stories in any meaningful way.

    At this point, frankly, I can only laugh the absurdity of it all out of me. I would be suffering if I wanted to somehow actually follow some sort story from this book. The means just aren’t there for me to use.

    The art is first rate, though.

  10. Krzysiek Ceran says:

    By the standards of this book, riding a hippo is weirdly pedestrian.

  11. Jdsm24 says:

    Thijs series is basically “USA BIPOC SJW Reparations”: X-(Wo)men Edition LOL I hope it never gets cancelled hehehe

  12. John says:

    Like the other commenters, I don’t really get this book. Will the story end with Storm being humbled, or will her next writer somehow have to top this?

    It is nice to see Bishop back in circulation, though.

  13. wwk5d says:

    I liked Ewing’s X-men Red.

  14. OvAr says:

    792744 5382Yeah bookmaking this wasnt a bad decision great post! . 717088

  15. Karl_H says:

    Maybe… This is what Grant Morrison writing looks like to someone who doesn’t ‘get’ Grant Morrison.

  16. Tim says:

    Thanks for the replies, folks!

    Glad to know my impression seems to match the concensus (though, if there’s a silent group who love it, no harm in liking what you like!)

    Oh well, I’m sure the wheel will turn and I’ll get back into the X-verse some time.

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